Jayatissa Liyanage

Gold Star - 35,423 Points (21st June / Walasmulla, Sri Lanka)

Gusto Unwarranted - Poem by Jayatissa Liyanage

Cardinal responsibility of the hen, brooding
is to warm up and protect eggs, of her own
not to peck and check chicks, within

Topic(s) of this poem: passion

Form: Haiku

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Comments about Gusto Unwarranted by Jayatissa Liyanage

  • Liza Sudina (9/28/2015 4:19:00 AM)

    NIce! do we have a right to eat them, eggs? - i was always curious... (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (9/9/2015 11:52:00 PM)

    It is the cardinal duty of mothers in general! But at times, a hen has to peck to help the chick come out if the shell is hard! (Report) Reply

    Jayatissa K. Liyanage (9/10/2015 7:54:00 AM)

    Of course, Valsa! Doing anything through dire need is warranted. Doing anything through over enthusiasm can spoil everything. Thanks very much for your view.

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/1/2015 8:52:00 AM)

    Truly, we should bother about fulfilling our duty and not to see outcome now and then (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (8/31/2015 3:25:00 PM)

    Nicely presented, Jayatissa (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (8/31/2015 12:38:00 PM)

    Wise words...........10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 31, 2015

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