Haiku - 136 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 136

Rating: 5.0


this lovely morning
won't be able to hold on
charm of fragile lights

Monday, October 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 02 November 2016

nice observation and presentation in three lines- 1o

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Susan Williams 31 October 2016

the melting away of dawn might be part of its charm- - if it stayed around all day we, being frail human beings, would get bored and complain that every day is like another! Love love love this haiku.10

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 31 October 2016

Everything in this world changes. We wait for but do not able to hold this. How lovely morning is really. But this does not last for long and time changes to day passing through noon, evening, night and then dawn and morning arrives of next day too. In this perishable world same charm does not last for long. Charm is fragile and morning light too. But still we get wisdom of eternity and flow of life. That eternity in glow of light of wisdom is lovely....Rating 10 for you.

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