Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 209,171 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Haiku - 6 – Match Box - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

This is match box
In the pocket of a man
Is it atomic can?

Topic(s) of this poem: war and peace

Comments about Haiku - 6 – Match Box by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • (3/1/2018 6:16:00 AM)

    I'll say! ! ! Avoid that. Lol. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/11/2016 7:35:00 PM)

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    xMesmerizing Haiku, Sir! Unique metaphor.
    3 Sep 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply

    picture of Ramin Ara
    xExquisite Sir.
    3 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

    picture of Shree Thakker
    xLove this.
    3 Sep 2015 by Shree Thakker | Reply

    picture of Jane Taylor Hardy
    xIntriguing haiku!
    3 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply

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    xthis is a mighty question that is open for debate.
    4 Sep 2015 by Kantanka Addo- Osafo | Reply

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    xwow so much impact in so few words!
    15 Oct 2015 by Catherine Flaherty | Reply
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  • (9/4/2015 8:08:00 AM)

    .......most incredible imagery.....the one thing that can destroy all...is in the hands of man, oh no! ★ (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/3/2015 9:35:00 PM)

    Truly, a match box is a small atomic can
    Nicely envisioned
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  • Kelly Kurt (9/3/2015 10:14:00 AM)

    The matchbox, by itself is not worrisome. Being in the pocket of man is terrifying (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/3/2015 9:49:00 AM)

    Superb! ! ! ! ! Imagination at its best...10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/3/2015 2:03:00 AM)

    I asked my father during my childhood, what is a chain reaction of nuclear weapons? He replied, if a match stick in a match box is lit somehow, all the sticks are ignited and cause a heavy fire. Now when I read this great poem I miss my father. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/3/2015 1:22:00 AM)

    Wow.. what a thought! really a single match has the power of a big destruction. thank you...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 3, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 3, 2015

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