Haiku About The Fall Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

Haiku About The Fall

Rating: 4.2


haiku, the beginning of fall



Saturday morning
there is a chill in the air
leaves fall silently.

Leaves are urchins
no one to discipline them
the lost generation

Summer is still here
by noon it will be hot again
the last gasp of death.

Yellow leaves on roads
the process is beginning
from the lost to soil.

Sunday, August 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 31 August 2020

Simply beautiful well penned Autumn in 4 haiku Enjoyed

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Quoth Theraven 30 August 2020

Oskar, It is right that it is so, the change in seasons. Your Haiku is proof enough. -QtR

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Dominic Windram 30 August 2020

Vivid imagery..beautifully expressed in haiku form...10 ++!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 August 2020

A well composed haiku. Truly wonderful.....10+++

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