Jonathan ROBIN

Freshman - 521 Points (22 September / London)

Haiku At Rest - Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

AT REST
From belovèd eyes
poetic fountain gushes,
heart ambushed, surprised.

Through expanding space
beyond old inhibitions
the mind may e[r]ase
artificial skins.
As spirit dissolves levels,
inner freedom wins,
consciousness, can chase
surface metamorphosis:
sh[r]edded to replace
superficial grins,
self-deception, whose dark hells
are man's greatest sins.

Shared understanding
underpins maturity
as momentum spins
through both thick and thin,
talent touches base with place
as feelings akin
to acceptance win
shared acceptance, mock need to [t]race
extension within
inner harmony, begin
growth in troth. Potential spells
end to shortcomings.

Mind may be at rest,
empathy, serenity,
all's held for the best.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

(21 July 2004 revised 16 January 2013)

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 1, 2013


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