Haiku … Coward Poem by Amitava Sur

Haiku … Coward

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Panicking pricks out of thorns?
Never dream of kissing soft rose petals
Just witness– never smell even.

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Amitava (12.5.2015) 4-45 pm

Haiku …  Coward
Saturday, May 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: indifference
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 29 June 2015

Witnessing the beauty of a rose, only smelling it's fragrance scent the atmosphere without bending over it, yet thorns are there protecting it from panicking when we come near. Really great haiku, Amitava! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 May 2015

So Beautiful. Just witness, never touch nor smell. Loved reading it.

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Ramesh Rai 16 May 2015

Beautiful. Flowers are not to touch not to smell even or else may get withered with filthy breath.

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