Haiku: Departure Poem by Walterrean Salley

Haiku: Departure

Rating: 5.0


Oppressive cloud pours
Forth upon the earth. A soul
Relinquishing life.

Friday, July 29, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: earth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 01 August 2011

After 'Laughter' I had hoped your Haiku to have a bit of humor. Try mine. Adeline

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