Haiku Of The Immortal Beauty Poem by Vincent Dali

Haiku Of The Immortal Beauty

Rating: 5.0


A Rose Petal Fell
From A Beautiful Red Rose
Landed Far Away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hope Wallin 25 January 2009

This poem is simple, and yet so pretty. :) Good Haiku!

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Leslie Ching 22 February 2009

'love is like a red, red rose...' a simple but poignant and delicate piece...10

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Perfect haiku...I write them too.this one has great imagery and deep meaning.A ten from me.

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Barry A. Lanier 16 February 2009

So much said in this Vincent, , , , , how so much of the beautiful and desirable fall away from us....out of our reach....

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Estrella Baldemosa 12 February 2009

it has the elements of a good haiku.

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Ana Zaldivar 30 January 2009

A very beautiful haiku poem! I've always tried to write one, but my 3 lines turn into a lot of paragraphs! so I admire you for writting one. very well done! ana

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