Wednesday, March 23, 2005

Haiku - Sand Comments

Rating: 4.5

reaching out
i throw a handful of sand
towards the stars
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john tiong chunghoo
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* Sunprincess * 30 April 2014

.......love the imagery of your haiku....and love this poem by service...he is one of my favourite poets...

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Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

Different this haiku is. Like it!

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Nasra Al Adawi 09 April 2005

I hope this takes the rule of Haiku..Any ways got inspired by your poem Inescapable leave Traveling with the wind Desert sand

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Nasra Al Adawi 09 April 2005

I loved this one...Maybe its something to d with the sand..Being living in the Middle East I guess

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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