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*haiku Series Vi: Death Caps And Milk Caps

Rating: 2.8

toadstools in woods
over mass graves:
shiny skulls

mushrooms
push out of moist humus:
baby's head crowning

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Susan Jarvis 28 June 2009

Magnificent! ! The stark and eerie image of those 'shiny skulls' is indelibly etched in my brain - the mark of a superb haiku. You've also managed a serious squelch in 'push out of moist humus' - carefully chosen words to optimum effect. S :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 June 2009

Charming pieces,10+++

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