Haiku Tears Poem by Ken e Hall

Haiku Tears

Rating: 5.0


Sky bends to kiss earth
Leaving tears so crystal pure
To consume the dry

Thursday, January 15, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,haiku,kiss,leaving,sky,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Queeny Gona 06 June 2015

Beautiful imagery sir Sky kissing earth with crystal pure tears to consume the dry! I like the way it has been depicted sir!

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Jessica Jemima 15 January 2009

Haiku is beautiful. So is this - thanks, a great metaphor. Perhaps I'm wrong, but is it not supposed to have 5 syllables in the last line? =)

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Ken e Hall

Ken e Hall

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