Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Haiku- The Serpent Comments

Rating: ★3.8

When the serpent lied
He challenged gods right to rule
And thus lost his legs
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

A thought to ponder. Like this!

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Subodh Pandey 29 May 2013

beautifully thought upon....

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Michael Oliver 16 May 2013

like the thinking -

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Godfrey Morris 16 May 2013

good one there... i love it

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Marieta Maglas 15 May 2013

You're right, good haiku

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 May 2013

ha ha ha. Very nice. Excellent imagination. Go on.

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Gajanan Mishra 14 May 2013

challenged God and lost leg. wonderful thought. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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