(I have always dreamed to be bald since I was younger. But there are some things which are stopping me. But this I promise myself, I will really fulfil it sometime soon. Hope you enjoy my short poem.)
I want to cut my hair
Till I only see the skin
I want to walk and run
And feel my hair is gone
It's been a long time dream
To do it But it seems
My guts are getting low
To be so bald, you know
But this I told myself
Before my time is done
I'll cut my hair away
And find out what I say
For I think it is nice
To feel what is not there
I want to be HANDSOME
Even for short a time.
For me it has a humor sense that you never thought you brought it here...it has cheer effect though and more smiling tone when i read the intro, it's really funny and done well by your talented hand! _Unwritten Soul
I love this poem, it's beautiful and witty. You should really do it, it's liberating.
Exactly, to avoid regression in the future. But nice poetry theme. Its grounded with true desire. Should I score it 10? Yes.Thanks for dropping by...waiting for you visit.
Why delay the excitement? Why not now? It would be a new experience, ha, ha, you must be fun to hang out with.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Seems like a small enough reward for such a loving and caring lady such as you. Those who know you would never dare to say one bad thing for you exercising your desire to experience that condition. Perhaps some friend would even join you in your escapade... I am a bald man and can assure you it is not fatal, ha ha.... Hope you have fun poet lady friend..... if you do or don't.... Just hope the most fun and most high for you............Jim Troy The poem is a dandy........ I love it
Where are you. Why aren't you writing anymore?