Poem Fever Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Poem Fever

Rating: 4.8


I feel sick-the feeling one feels when he has a fever
The same anxiety, ill-mood, and very sober
I feel numb-as the fever triggers inch by inch
Making me worried, I need a pinch
I panic-afraid not to find the right words
Like a nice song played in the wrong chords
Ah..Poem Fever here you are again
Even in my sleep you keep haunting.

So I closed my eyes, the words fall like rain
I pick each line that reaches my brain
Put each mood, emotion and feelings
And every little joy and pain my heart sings
Every verse flows from my heart to my pen
Like a river flowing until now since then
Ah..Poem Fever here you are again
In my dream every night you keep coming.

Like a young girl's cheeks kissed by the wind
I am beaming
Like a bud in the morning kissed by the dew
I am skipping
Like a delicate skin kissed by the sun
I am smiling
Ah..Poem Fever here you are again
Even when I'm at rest, you're insisting.

Like the flowers and bees who are inseparable
We can't separate
Like ice cream and cake you're irresistible
I can't resist
Like the sun and the moon who share the same sky
We share the high
Ah..Poem Fever you're here to stay
You visit me each day come what may.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liliana ~el 21 September 2013

Beautiful gorgeous perfect embodiment of our processes! ! ! : D

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Khairul Ahsan 22 September 2013

An excellent poem, Naida! Thoroughly enjoyed reading it, so 10/10! I think all poets suffer from this kind of fever. Some periodically, some perennially! And heartiest congratulations for its being selected as the 'Member Poem'!

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I feel like this when the Muse grabs me for another round of co-operative inspiration...great spin on poetry..a ten

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 September 2014

The thing inseparable lovely poem and PH and its member know soul and body inseparable if separated decays

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 September 2013

straight from heart its beautiful ink.liked it.

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Denis Mair 08 October 2024

I am glad to hear of your poem fever. As it goes deeper into the marrow, readers like me will be the beneficiaries.

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Reza Raza 08 October 2024

A1

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Bri Edwards 08 October 2024

Naida, With this: 'Like ice cream and cake you're irresistible' you are REALLY talking 'my language', Where IS that cake and ice cream! ! ! ***** ;) bri

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Chinedu Dike 28 September 2019

Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing, Naida.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 August 2019

I simply love this poem, dear ate Naida....

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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