Wednesday, July 15, 2009

Hallucinogenic Sound Of The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beaches have no rest as same as the waves.
Deep sea hides all these mysterious happenings.
Hey! Champion swimmer do not go any further please
It's deep like life,
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 28 July 2009

The beauty and the terror of the sea expressed with your own distinctive brand of wordsmithing. You have a rare gift for communicating complicated ideas with clarity and metaphor, Nimal. This is a wonderful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 15 July 2009

Your concluding lines are richly imagistic. Wonderful write about the enigmatic sea. Warm regards, Sandra

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Obinna Eruchie 15 July 2009

Engaging piece about the sea and its perils.

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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