Hallucinogenic Sound Of The Sea Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Hallucinogenic Sound Of The Sea

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Beaches have no rest as same as the waves.
Deep sea hides all these mysterious happenings.
Hey! Champion swimmer do not go any further please
It's deep like life,
And you may be a life-saver
But it's not applicable as the current has no live heart.
You are a novice my dear!
And many old ships rest on the sea bed with their rusty anchors
While the bearded Masters still stuck on bridge watches
As they cannot abandon the vessels.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 28 July 2009

The beauty and the terror of the sea expressed with your own distinctive brand of wordsmithing. You have a rare gift for communicating complicated ideas with clarity and metaphor, Nimal. This is a wonderful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 15 July 2009

Your concluding lines are richly imagistic. Wonderful write about the enigmatic sea. Warm regards, Sandra

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Obinna Eruchie 15 July 2009

Engaging piece about the sea and its perils.

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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