Hand In Hand! Poem by Aadil Masood

Hand In Hand!

Rating: 4.3


Hands in hands going on
Their spirits tied to each other
As the daystar, their hope glows
As the wild wind, their speed goes
As the spiders their grips on the slopes
High above the peaks their goals live
With Infinite nature in their eyes
With Infinite bliss in their hearts
From the mountains their spirits flow
Hard work but sweet work
Yes! They are the mountaineers
Hands in hands going on

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 May 2013

very interesting well clarified, nice message through the mountaineers, If we want developments than we have to have our hand together nice poem and this is the Ist on PH welcome you with the ratings thank

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Gajanan Mishra 03 May 2013

hands in hands going on in love no ups no down, going on and on. good poem. thanks.

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Bright Morn 02 June 2013

One and one make eleven so if we go hands in hands and look upon our destination with courage and determination then success will be at our feet, good write

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Shahzia Batool 14 May 2013

A lesson of life this mountaineering is! ! ! Set your eyes on goal, stay determined in heart, give hand in hand like links of a chain! ! !

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Yasmin Khan 10 May 2013

Apart from it's literal meanings it can also be interpreted on metaphorical level. If peaks are climbed hand in hand journey becomes easy and sweet.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 May 2013

Wow a unique take on d mount climbers. Gr8 to read. I hope u read mine too esp do coment my latest.

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Saadat Tahir 05 May 2013

lovely nice lines on a topic not often seen as a mountaineer, i doubly enjoyed it kudos write more often.... you have it in you

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