Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 798,545 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hands With Prayers - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Oh God and almighty, Shower some pity
There lies eternal and divine beauty
I feel and want to be part of every moment
Whether it memorable or sad movement

So wonderful world to live in with blessings
Courageous stand when comes for facing
Not loosing faith for single second
Even if life is simple writing on sand

Each and every moment makes me feel closer
I never felt that I was any time looser
You were my guiding spirit and force
I had to cut never a sorry or to feel curse

As human I need be part of every move
But belief and faith need not be proved
I shall stick to imposition of divine vision
That shall stand every time to remove the confusion

What can’t be had if has desired?
Your every effort is appreciated and admired
You are dear sons and daughters
It is his duty to send you with laughter

Love to live any situation
Believe in grace with its continuation
If that has to be lived with means to be lived
The path carved out for us is to be simply believed

You may look back at the end and evaluate
Your mind will be firm and will never fluctuate
It will be happiness that had been all the times
You might have erred and disbelieved sometimes


Comments about Hands With Prayers by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2011 6:11:00 AM)

    Syed Meraj Ahmad really a prayer! 6 hours ago · Like (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2011 6:10:00 AM)

    Send message | DeleteSylvia Frances Chan
    But belief and faith need not be proved...I fully agree with this line! The building up of this poem is brilliant! ! Excellent poem, Sir!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2011 6:10:00 AM)

    Send message | Deleterobyn selters
    a faith can sure give some a sense of certainty... even if at times there is disbelief
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2011 6:10:00 AM)

    Kavitha Rani Nice guidelines for the much feared path of human life..we always count the troubles..ignoring the blessings.4 hours ago · Like (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 7, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 8, 2011


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