Lee Degnan

Rookie - 1 Points (05/29/73 / Peekskill, NY)

Hang Up - Poem by Lee Degnan

watch you
watching me
want you
wanting me
can't think
can't breathe
could you
deny me?
wait, no
wait for
don't know
something more?
some sign
you might
not mind
another score?
too bold
oh no
see you
gonna go
can't think
you see
rather you
f*cking me
watched you
watching me
makes me
wanna scream
can't see
you be
ever wanting
to deny me.


Comments about Hang Up by Lee Degnan

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (8/12/2007 10:09:00 AM)

    awe! ! ! ! ! absolutely genial, i like the style, thanks (Report)Reply

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  • (8/6/2007 11:20:00 PM)

    Cool poem, interesting style. -Kylie M. Lynch (Report)Reply

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  • (12/7/2006 9:02:00 AM)

    Great story poemo Lee...

    All the best
    Roger
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  • (10/24/2006 6:39:00 PM)

    Yeah, this is good,

    And it reads really well to...

    well done lee.
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  • (10/11/2006 11:35:00 AM)

    great poem, , , , , , , , , i can see every word................10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 10, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, October 15, 2010


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