(happened) Despair Poem by Sari Mavi

(happened) Despair



Fire danced in my mind
Slowly burning All my longing about you

Fire danced in my mind
Slowly burn All the dreams about you

Fire danced in my mind
Slowly burning myself

Fire constantly danced in my mind,
slowly burning
Then make it as dust

(That's what happened
When the time did it perfectly for me)

Saturday, November 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2017

Mental fire is more powerful than ordinary fire. It burns the longing, dreams and mind even the body and makes it dust. Dear madam, you have astutely and nicely inscribed this poem. Let few lines be quoted here.... Fire danced in my mind Slowly burning All my longing about you Fire danced in my mind Slowly burn All the dreams about you Beautiful poem amazingly shared. Fire danced in my mind Slowly burning myself

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