Sunday, September 13, 2015

Happy Explosion Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bing, bang, boom,
Explosion!
Pen or pencil
Big commotion,
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Sandra Feldman
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Chuy Amante 14 September 2015

boom, bing, bang, wow! thought punctures mind with gore now there is no thinking but grey matter is on the floor

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David Wood 13 September 2015

I agree with Kelly, I don't find obscure poems -poems, I pass them by. Good ink.

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Kelly Kurt 13 September 2015

Oh! I agree! Purposely being obscure is not 'high art', it is aggravating to me. Say what you mean and say it well, I say

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