Bing, bang, boom,
Explosion!
Pen or pencil
Big commotion,
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I agree with Kelly, I don't find obscure poems -poems, I pass them by. Good ink.
Oh! I agree! Purposely being obscure is not 'high art', it is aggravating to me. Say what you mean and say it well, I say
boom, bing, bang, wow! thought punctures mind with gore now there is no thinking but grey matter is on the floor