Happy Explosion Poem by Sandra Feldman

Happy Explosion

Rating: 5.0


Bing, bang, boom,
Explosion!
Pen or pencil
Big commotion,
A poem from the heart,
Ready to zoom,
It may be fair,
It may be good,
But most of all,
Should be understood.

Sunday, September 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 14 September 2015

boom, bing, bang, wow! thought punctures mind with gore now there is no thinking but grey matter is on the floor

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David Wood 13 September 2015

I agree with Kelly, I don't find obscure poems -poems, I pass them by. Good ink.

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Kelly Kurt 13 September 2015

Oh! I agree! Purposely being obscure is not 'high art', it is aggravating to me. Say what you mean and say it well, I say

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