Sandra Feldman


Happy Explosion - Poem by Sandra Feldman

Bing, bang, boom,
Explosion!
Pen or pencil
Big commotion,
A poem from the heart,
Ready to zoom,
It may be fair,
It may be good,
But most of all,
Should be understood.

Topic(s) of this poem: poetry


Comments about Happy Explosion by Sandra Feldman

  • Alice Perfect (9/14/2015 2:24:00 PM)


    boom, bing, bang, wow!
    thought punctures mind with gore
    now there is no thinking but
    grey matter is on the floor
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  • David Wood (9/13/2015 5:09:00 PM)


    I agree with Kelly, I don't find obscure poems -poems, I pass them by. Good ink. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (9/13/2015 3:26:00 PM)


    Oh! I agree! Purposely being obscure is not 'high art', it is aggravating to me. Say what you mean and say it well, I say (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 13, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 13, 2015


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