Oh my dear! Oh my dear!
Bidding adieu I'm going to rear
May you all have great time ahead?
Wishing you all A Happy New Year
I'm nothing compared, to what comes soon
Agony hurts my core and brings in the gloom
I get angry and start to hate
I don't wanna leave but it's my fate
If I stop, and remember the time
My heart gets filled and refuse to shine
I gave you moments gelled with gain
Forgive me if I ever caused you pain
When I came I was a child
The first day was a booster
Following were little mild
Day by day I started growing old
I thank you all for getting me rolled
I remember a day; I came like a spy
The firecrackers roaring high up in the sky
The moonlight spreading its aura smiling in rie
The twinkling of stars, as clouds soar high
I was rolling in, and all were set to bash.
They were united, to have a big smash!
Bright shining eyes with hopes of having fun
Ready to breach hurdles and glimmer like sun
None wanted to disappear in the crowd of rest
So all were dressed up in their snazziest best,
They looked great, and I was feeling bright.
I never imagined such welcome even at night.
I saw them laughing, frolic, sing and dance
I didn't miss anything and enjoyed every trance
In my fondest, most perfect dreams.
I enjoyed the crowd and heard all scream
A confusion of melodies in the cheer of people
Strings of violins creating the ripple
Beating of drums, hitting the deck
All rising together forming a beck (A mountain stream)
Crash of cymbals reaching every knoll (hill)
Keys of Piano making everybody roll
People singing carol as I begin to fall
Cheering in harmony, making me enthrall
I'm here just for a while then making a sway
A brand New Year for you is on its way
Giving a clean slate for you to write
Fill it with hopes, dreams to prove your might.
Cherish your past memories, live every day
Wish for others well being as you pray
Fill strangers with love and greatest feelings
Treat all with respect and give them greetings
Year like me comes and go
Memories trail behind adored in a row
Be peaceful and celebrate the trait
You'll get everything, as its all set.
A Year is another change to start life anew
Leap old barriers to have a real breakthrough
Cherish you beloved and give them joy
Fill them with peace don't act ploy
Let's work very hard; to get the rules bent
Decide on priorities and set the trend
Let's make a resolution and give up all bad habits;
Let's be smart so our goals are accomplished,
May you get a variety of pleasures
May you be glad and content with treasure
While reading my suggestions you may feel tired
But that's to show off you talents to get others inspired
A poem...full of energy & positivity... the last two stanzas have all the life within! ! ! good job! ! !
My cordial thanks to next two angels in here...I have read your poems and you people are simply stupendous...Will give my comments all at a time with few suggestions too
What a flow... Reading you describing those cheerfull times.... I could feel myself standing there and enjoying those times to. Philosophies n fun n message...all wrapped up sooo well. A brillant write. Worth reading this one....! ! !
the flow the poem is absolutely phenomenal the words are pinned beautiful and the meaning is beyond explanation...bravo sir
Thnks to both of you angels. I'm gald after having comments from two best writers in here. My new Year kicked off so well.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What an original idea a poem about the passing year as if it's a person watching over us, amazing imagery so colourful and bright! With such a wonderful message to us all, thanks for sharing!