Hard Illusion (For Mihaela Pirjol) ~ Velika Iluzija (Tanka) Poem by Jankovic Zoran

Hard Illusion (For Mihaela Pirjol) ~ Velika Iluzija (Tanka)

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Hard illusion (Tanka)

watch the baby
but if you see in the web
hard illusion
watch out the little spider
may be a black widow

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Velika iluzija (Tanka)

ako gledaš bebu
ako je u njenoj mreži
velika iluzija
pazi možda će pauk
biti crna udovica.

Saturday, February 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: illusion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This tanka is inspired by the poem Determination by Mihaela Pirjol.
I tried to write it in a metric rhythm: 5,7,5,7,7.

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Ova tanka je inspirisana pjesmom Determination Mihaele Pirjol.
Pokušao sam da je napišem u metričkom ritmu: 5,7,5,7,7.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 07 March 2020

Thank you, Mr. Zoran! I am glad that my tanka 'Determination' has inspired this composition of yours, which goes in parallel with mine.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 March 2020

In the beautiful I float inquisitive sight roaming aimlessly in the void the spider net home of the temporary///

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