Hate Poem by Vasto Grom

Hate

Rating: 5.0


Just like the sun rises and sets each day.
So will my hatred continually eat away.
Until everything is gone.
And all that is left are the pictures I've drawn.
It burns so very deep inside of me.
Slowly consuming my flesh until it can burst free.
Then it will grow as it burns down all I worked so hard to create.
Sadly though I know this is just a matter of fate.
Even during times of peace it burns inside of me with its twisted light.
And I know that it could finally win even now on this night.
This hatred burns inside me so.
A hatred you will never know.
And everyday this hate will grow.
This hate that I must never show.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Godfrey Morris 05 March 2015

I sense a lot of anger in your poems. I think this is a great way to let it go. Let your anger be your fuel.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 September 2011

HATRED SHOULD BE TURNED TO LOVE GO SHOW IT GO EXPRESS IT AND WHEN IT IS DONE AND WHEN IT IS GONE LOVE WILL RULE YOUR HEART APART FROM THIS I FEEL THE INTENSITY OF YOUR POEM IN YOUR WORDS AND IN THE THEME YOU WROTE ABOUT NICE LINES NICE POEM.

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Ameera Aidrus 01 September 2011

wow.....awsum lines! ! ! !

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