Have You Ever Been In Love? Comments

hey! when i submitted my new poem (see below) , it didn't sound 'right'! i've changed it to this: Impossible To Keep... [ Inspired By Lora Colon's Have You Ever Been In Love; Mostly True] - Poem by Bri Edwards For me, loving comes easy, and it doesn't make me queasy... (thank goodness) . A winsome smile, a bedding trial, and out comes wedding band, but in a year or four or nine, the smile... is gone; I release my once-loved one's hand. But, cheer up! . Bri does not (often) weep, 'cause so far he's learned: 'Love is impossible to keep.' (November 26,2016) Bri Edwards Topic(s) of this poem: love

Oh, Oh, no words, so spellbound I'm!

so beautiful, so true. your last stanza is outstanding.

yes, it is possible to keep! a lively poem to the hearts!