Hazy Break. Poem by Fay Slimm

Hazy Break.

Rating: 5.0


Glass plated today
.................. the sea bakes hazily,
Breaks the sky away
.................. from dark hinterland.
Sun fills, with light
.........spangled diamonds crazily
Dancing, the spacious
........... basin which lies between,
Fires it alive,
.................... and hypnotises me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 27 September 2009

You have created lovely images in this piece Fay...10

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Carol Gall 21 September 2009

lovely fay yor words are so vivid 10

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Bob Gibson 21 September 2009

Hiriri! 'Maori 'sparkling light! dancing, rippling, waves delight! cast upon a a silent sea diamonds for the likes of thee

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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