Theodora (Theo) Onken

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He Sees Me This Way~ - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

He sees me as some sort of sex symbol
That he wants to control
His daydreams jump my bones
And love me all the way to my marrow
A kind of skin on skin ravaging
Sweat drenched sheets overcome by
A deluge of lusty actioned storms
A virtual expose' of temporarily insane positions
Filled to the brim with the ups and downs
Of a more or less frictioned rhythmn
Heated to absolute bliss
With no turning back
And satisfaction coming as a pulsating volcano erupting
Like lava spewed everywhere and anywhere
Yes, he sees me this way!

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This write has nothing to do with me or my beliefs. Actually am not sure where it came from as my Muse took me here. It could be that some of the inspiration has come from some poetry i have been reading of late and i just wanted to try my hand at it. Please, please, do not take this write personally as it does not have anything to do with me or anybody in my life. Thank you.


By: Theodora Onken
October 1,2012

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Comments about He Sees Me This Way~ by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Theodora Onken (11/13/2012 2:24:00 PM)

    Truly this had nothing to do with me in any way. I had been talking with a teacher/poet...who had suggested i read another's poems on this site. Her first name is Angie i believe...he loves her writes...and so i took a peek and saw what she wrote of...and i just wanted to prove to this great teacher/poet that i was capable of writing in a similar fashion, even though, it is not me, not my inner self either, believe me, i i looked again at her work and thought and thought...this was not easy, and no it did not come from deep in this case, i, respectfully disagree. When i wrote about my reasons, that was the truth...this DID NOT come from my inner being. Whether you choose to believe that or not, is your right. i know the truth. It WAS NOT abot me, nor did it have anything to do with me in any way! (Report)Reply

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  • Whisperkwane Lamb (11/13/2012 12:52:00 PM)

    I understand you said this has nothing to do with you or anyone you know...but I would think as you the woman who
    might have read or seem a a place...has been touched deep, deep within your inner self..and as you began to write those word from within your inner self came running to the front to be heard so you let them...and I
    believe you know, you let them write...I enjoy the heat...and Sweat drenched sheets

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 2, 2012

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