Erin Jane Creshilt

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Head Over Heels - Poem by Erin Jane Creshilt

Your playful laugh
Your genuine smile
The sparkle in your eyes
Got me so addicted into you

Mesmerized by your soulful eyes
Which captured the emotions that you tried to hide
But they can never disguise
The fact that you’re falling head over heels for someone
Someone who’s not me

Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak, love, romance, unrequited love

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Head Over Heels by Erin Jane Creshilt

  • Anil Kumar Panda (11/7/2015 10:40:00 PM)

    Let the gate close for him. Take another route. Liked it. (Report) Reply

    Erin Jane Creshilt (11/8/2015 12:01:00 AM)

    I've already moved on a long time ago Tiku. But there's this little piece of my heart that still continues to love him after all these years. And no matter how hard I try to get rid of it it just keeps on resurfacing. Anyway, I'm venting out already.. haha. I'm glad that you liked my poem :)

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  • Liza Sudina (11/7/2015 10:30:00 AM)

    Forget him! God prepared another much better gift for you! I love you. (Report) Reply

    Erin Jane Creshilt (11/7/2015 10:23:00 PM)

    Thanks Liza :)

  • (11/7/2015 9:18:00 AM)

    but your name is Casanova, how can that be?
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    Erin Jane Creshilt (11/7/2015 10:21:00 PM)

    Just because my surname is Casanova doesn't mean that I frequently seduce guys and sleep with them. Stop judging me because of my name because you don't know who I really am and you don't know all the years of hidden pain and heartbreak that I went through just because of the single guy who only considers me as a friend.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 7, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 25, 2015

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