Heart Knocks Poem by Jennifer Strubel

Heart Knocks



Startled, by this trembling pound.
Standing, my feet planted on the ground.

But my world slipping six feet below my soles -
cannot make sense of the decisions I choose.

Speaking of souls, it’s knocking around my frame.
Fueling the fire, feeding life to this pain.

I feel emptiness, and lifeless; and so so bad.
I am soulless, and spineless; and so so sad.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philip Housiaux 05 February 2008

Very good work. the strong beat and rhyme in the couplets really give bang to your poweful statements! thanks

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