Heart Knocks Poem by Jennifer Strubel

Heart Knocks



Startled, by this trembling pound.
Standing, my feet planted on the ground.

But my world slipping six feet below my soles -
cannot make sense of the decisions I choose.

Speaking of souls, it’s knocking around my frame.
Fueling the fire, feeding life to this pain.

I feel emptiness, and lifeless; and so so bad.
I am soulless, and spineless; and so so sad.

Tuesday, February 5, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness,fire,sad,standing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philip Housiaux 05 February 2008

Very good work. the strong beat and rhyme in the couplets really give bang to your poweful statements! thanks

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