Monday, August 31, 2009

Heart Of Man (To My Daughter) 10/15/78 Comments

Rating: 5.0

i looked into my daughters eyes
love and affection i could not hide.
while explaining to her what life meant to me
the tears started to roll very freely.
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louis rams
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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'My body may die, but not my soul' Rachel ann Butler

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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan 14 September 2009

What a sweet poem, you showed your deepest affection to your family, and most especially to your daughter.. Great husband, father, great POET! I rated you 10.

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dr veenaa rai 11 September 2009

love your sentimental feelings for your daughter....god bless your soul..

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Surya . 06 September 2009

beautiful and touching poem. voted10 surya

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Shashendra Amalshan 03 September 2009

Hey this is very nice indeed... I am so happy for you.. She must be old now na..! ! ! 1 Some times being a father kinda creeps me out, cause I have to provide and run a family and alll the probs that gona come, yet if some one get a lovely wife and such a lovely daughter it's all worth the pain I guess... Hard to find such lovely people these days though.. cheers shan

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2009

i looked into my daughters eyes love and affection i could not hide. while explaining to her what life meant to me the tears started to roll very freely....it is true father can love and show the feelings to daughter..it is natural.. i loved the sentiments expressed in the poem. i loved it so much.....10 read mine smiley....papa do know...papa u too.

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