*heart Solitude* Poem by Dwi utami

*heart Solitude*

Rating: 2.9


I'to pass alone the cold night without tears*
Attempt for standing without love and try the feeling heart solitude*
I'passed my long night without word's*
without power*

Tried for to pass the current ocean of love that has bring me in heart solitude*
Tried for running to resist the current dark night that was impossible*

When the current attacked and made collapse my heart*
I'fall and sink in heart solitude*
Hoped received the warm hug*
Waiting the holy kiss*

I'passed my heart solitude*
Tried to erase my feel yearn that was impossible*
I'planted my longing too much in grounds my heart, and only will become wound in my heart**

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 August 2010

‘Hoped received the warm hug* Waiting the holy kiss*’ ~ Here swing of emotion…lovely… ‘I'planted my longing too much in grounds my heart, and only will become wound in my heart**’ ~ Here de=swing of emotion…it is called poetic twist and you’ve carried me till last two lines…deluge of emotion…excellent from heart in solitude the womb of poetry… thanks sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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