Heart Throb Poem by me poet yeps poet

Heart Throb

Rating: 5.0


Semi -hikoooo

When hearts pain
Memories wane
humans tend to become insane

Thursday, September 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,love,poem,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
Inspired by a very young poet here
Compose
when thoughts germinate

Why force against gravity
Hence this shortest version
of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 28 September 2018

Yah! ! It's true........ Naila

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Naila Rais 01 October 2018

Ur reply can be taken in two ways bcz it don't have any comma..... Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 October 2018

thanks young one what have you composed

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2018

When human beings do not behave positively and properly towards each other then hearts get pain. This semi Haiku is definitely very thought provoking poem....10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 September 2018

I called it a semi haiku as haiku has a 5-7-5 count my poetry does not itself on laden frames mount hence the discount

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