Heartbroken Poem by Rachel Butler

Heartbroken

Rating: 4.5


(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)


He is the star that is the central body of the solar system,
......................................... that resides in the heavens.

To alleviate the grief,
.......................I must continue in the state of sereneness.

Not either could I arise to the sun,
....................or from the heavens he would never plunge.

Sparrow

Monday, October 24, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 22 September 2015

Stunning write Rachel with beautiful imagery, you easily say it all in a few lines with such passion delivered as always with panache!

0 0 Reply
Bharat Mehru 16 March 2012

nice lines, good writing.Keep going.Good Luck.

0 0 Reply
Renu Kakkar 30 January 2012

beautiful, there is an indian movie song about the earth going to meet the sun, i will send you the link and the translated lyrics...this situation has been depicted

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success