Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Heaven And Earth #2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

when i look to the heavens and see the beauties of the sky
then i know the reason why.
why i was put on this earth, and why to me
my mother gave birth.
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Kranthi Pothineni 15 September 2009

The ending lines are composed brilliantly. You had laid a nice message on this page.

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Christine Kerr 12 September 2009

A great strength can be felt here, with the words you choose and your serial topic

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Deborah Cromer 10 September 2009

Strong and powerful. Full of faith. Nicely done and written out for the reader to grasp. Good message. DC

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Sandra Fowler 09 September 2009

Very inspiring. You have the courage of your convictions. I am so glad you are posting at poemhunter. Take care. Kind wishes, Sandra

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