Heaven And Hell Comments

Wonderful thing resides inside every life and every object. Good poem

Man searches for Him in temples, churches, and calls him aloud, when He is so close within. A typically attractive fragrance makes the deer search for it far and wide, makes it mad with frustration, when in reality the fragrance comes from its very organ. well said.

To sum up, this is utterly a brilliant poem! Keep it up!

But it was dormant, completely dormant, That's why I could not see it with my open eyes....wonderfully done!

Then I found the sublime thing In a remote corner of my inner self.....great you could get at your destination!

But I was determined To find it............I wholeheartedly admire your quest....well penned.............................10/10