Heaven's Gate Poem by L MILTON HANKINS

Heaven's Gate

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Before the dusk consumed the dark and gloomy day
My soul had readied terrors for the night which lay
Ahead, and promised tortuous hours of sleeplessness
No rest would come; no peace, no happiness.

The best of me was sleeping sound at heaven's gate
Where years, perhaps, she planned to rest and wait
Until a brighter morn I should leave this realm of fears
And wash her golden hair with then my sweetest tears.

Bright morn—a new day born—the sun appears anew
Suggests a new attempt to find the peace I sought through
Copious tears and deep despair, oh pity me, I say
New start, new dreams, new hope, new plans today.

Why despair o'er things I cannot alter in this life
Best live in the sunshine and melt away the strife.

Saturday, August 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 10 September 2020

Really a poignant bit of verse nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2020

Sleeplessness! ! Stress! ! ! Depression. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 August 2020

A truly superb sonnet. Beautifully written and well composed...10+++

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L MILTON HANKINS

L MILTON HANKINS

Hico Fayette Co West Virginia
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