Heaven To Look Like Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Heaven To Look Like



Heaven to look like
Monday,10th September 2018

What shall the heaven look like?
when it doesn't strike
with the noble ideas
of staying with the familyas good entities

we were poor
but kept open the doors
for the neighbors
and others too

the happiness and sentiments were shared
and co-operation was always offered
each one felt the hurt caused by others
but never thought of any hidden fear

the single room provided us the safe heaven
where we were always happily driven
and moved upstairs with the progress
with abundance at disposal and access

It was the miracle but brought troubles too
no one had time to spare and realize through
the sentiments of each other
each one had feelings but with the hidden fear

I missed the olden days
that had given me the golden rays
to feel the shine of the sun
now I run desperately in search of my own

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

Heaven To Look Like
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 September 2018

You are a gentleman and a senior poet here with outstanding contribution! I strongly believe you would not support the idea of occupying so much space unethically with erroneous works..we must have serious introspection on this issue seeking amicable settlement! No one should be driven out nor their sincere and significant service be ignored!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2018

You leave the role of judge to the readers

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2018

what makes you to think extra ordinary. you are purchaing google followers and trying to remain in fray. this is all well known

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 September 2018

I never appreciate the idea of putting many images of a fellow who continuously writes meaningless poems! How long should we go on cheating intellectual audience when we claim to be toppers?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2018

I rire you for fbeing rude and unreasonable fellow and block u forever for crtocong eh work of a poet who does so much for the cause of literatire

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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