Neha Aradhye

Heavenly Essence.......

Little did I know about the world outside,
till the time, i was residing inside,
under the shed of safety & the love of custody....
A lil' unknown to the things around me,
but familiar to the way she was treating me...
Gradually, i came into existence,
I saw joyance in her eyes at that instance....
For them, this moment was splendid,
significant, blissful, divine indeed......

After a span of time, I learnt many things,
to be a person of dignity & positive feelings...
You rectified the errors in me,
& magnified the qualities of me...
u overlooked me, being sometimes juvenile,
& just got along with my funky-cool lifestyle....

You contributed to my efforts, (a great deal)
& showed me that life is way too far for shortcuts...
You were always there wen i was running out of senses,
& guided me along in colorful sequences...
You have asymmetrical techniques,
that makes me reach for my targeted peaks...

Now, here i am, by my own,
a well grown fruit, that u had sown...
Ready to take off anytime,
For u have struggled to win a victory out of mine! ! ! ! ! ! !


Love you,
Mom n' Dad
.........

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 19, 2009

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  • Mula Veereswara RaoMula Veereswara Rao (6/2/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    when compared with 'Love' poem Heavenly Essence is nice one and systematically built to climax. Keep writing.Pl.avoid repetition in poems which
    is observed in 'Love' poem. Please comment on my poems ' Mother', Made in India '

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  • Shagun Khera (5/24/2009 11:19:00 AM)

    nice dediction to parents...

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  • Dhanesh Aradhye (5/19/2009 8:08:00 AM)

    wel wel wel... m spechless & spellbound too... so simple n charmin and so so deep.. this a one of ur best i feel.. loved it totally...
    :)

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