Thinking What To Give As Title Name... Poem by Neha Aradhye

Thinking What To Give As Title Name...

Rating: 5.0


Hey Buddy,
what happened? ?

We were talking on the phone
& you sounded in a moody tone...
Then, something i said,
was/is misunderstood by your head...
Before i could say anything, you cut the phone call,
I was wondering, , , 'was that all? ? '
So, after sometime, i called you back,
& guess what, you were on the same track....
I asked you, 'what's the matter? ? '
You replied me in pieces of temper...

I am still in a confusion,
regarding your attitude towards me,
No signs of your anger's mansion..
Still thinking.. 'why are you mad at me? ? '

So, i composed this tiny poetry to bring you a smile,
I may not be there always by your side,
But now, here to cheer you up in my style....

...! ! ! ....


To you Amit da! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yaseen Anwer 25 December 2008

very fine stroke i guess amit have melted

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Kesav Easwaran 18 December 2008

and you did cheer him up well...i am able to see from my PC desk...good write...good flow of cheerful words...ten for you, Neha...

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Cherry Sha 12 December 2008

hehe..Nice Amit might have melted after reading this sweet little poem

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 December 2008

sometime untitled become great... finely penned! 10++

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Dhanesh Aradhye 12 December 2008

Title could have been: 'To Amit da' so that he reads it firstup. very bubbly kinda lines.. joyous.. will sure make anyone smile. :)

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