Last Night... Poem by Neha Aradhye
Last Night...
Last night I dream t about us where we were,
under the blue skies when the evening was beginning to fall,
watching the birds flying above,
while standing by the ocean & feeling the swirling wind,
our arms around each other, feeling the magic of love....................
Lovely sentiments, Neha. I would like to humbly offer the suggestion that you add '-ning' to 'begin' (Line 2) . Sorry, once an English teacher, always an English teacher. You know what they say 'Old English teachers never die - they just complete their sentences! ' Best wishes! a.a.
magical evening...magical dream...good piece, Neha...expresses the inside longing very well...10
Did you notice the TOUCH of GRACE that BLESSED you with those moments...............Ms.Neha! KEEP it UP please. the TOUCH of GRACE has a GIFT into this world.......... in YOU! to offer with Flowers & Fruits of ETERNITY, - FRAGRANT and NOURISHING to the humankind :) -shree
nice scene u saw... wel penned.. made me remind on my Enchanter... nice 1... :)
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nice poem really lovely......great imagery the ocean and the swaying waves of love