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I Am Still Tongue-Tied...! ! ...! ! ! ...

Rating: 4.8
I'll walk with u for over miles and miles,
& adorn our relationship wit unparalleled-unlike lifestyles..

Drizzle my love on YOU - who is a grandeur,
because YOU signify the strings that are paired in courses in a guitar..

You'll always be my prerogative,
MY sweet-hearten, soft-hearten festive...
Yaseen Anwer 12 December 2008
Dear u rock with dis master piece very small and very deep well constructed deserve 10 on10... Regards Yas
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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008
A very beautiful romantic poem. Y get 10++...........
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premji premji 04 December 2008
nehaa, beautiful lines... loveeeeeeeeeee! 0***********
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Sathyanarayana M V S 02 December 2008
Nicely romantic. But needs to be properly structured and pruned at places...........8
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Deependra Kumar Jha 02 December 2008
Lovely feelings! I admire your commitment and passion..and I do hope that you will be able to walk for 'over miles and miles' in Love.
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C. P. Sharma 01 December 2008
Beautiful, For love we live, In love we die, In love's ocean ever dive. CP
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Dhanesh Aradhye 01 December 2008
hey, nice one dear. 'Drizzle my love on YOU - who is a grandeur' I gues your Love will be more grand than his. I loved this line. keep rocking... :)
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Kesav Easwaran 01 December 2008
lost in dedicated love...'drizzle my love on you' is a line really pleasing to read...good piece, Neha...i give you ten
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 01 December 2008
Hey...a very different poem...loved it...crafted with an uncanny creativity. 'YOU signify the strings that are paired in courses in a guitar..' wonderful....thanks.
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rohit sapra 01 December 2008
This poem displays a well made creation done through very good usage of words which reflects lot of creativity.
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