Abused, Used
Neglected
and Confused
Rejected, Infected
Traumatically Affected
Bruised to the core,
Beaten on the floor,
Cried 'no more! '
But still left sore,
Blamed, Shamed
Numb
and Contained
Chained, Slain
to the Aches
and the Pain
Searched for support,
Thought to report,
Both cut short
With results all sort,
It was Listed!
The Pros and Cons
Both very long
The Counslers Insisted!
Papa would be gone
For what he done wrong,
But the Issue Persisted!
Mama needa be strong
To help Sista hold on
Since this Resolution
Held complex Solutions
I Rejected Revelation
And Accepted my
Situation
And so,
Alone,
I Roamed,
Not Stoned,
But Owned...
All the while
Loathing
my
Hell Known as Home.
Your writing is amazing and filled with so much emotion the pain frustration confusion and strength pours out your writing. Brought tears to my eyes
This is very moving. Love the fact that you are sharing this as it helps so much to tell others your suffering. I really really admire you. Thank you
Hmmmm! I read the work without looking at the note! The poem goes down well....good rhyming...and i commend you yet u broke the line somehow and ending never flowed.....+ love it....keep it up better...!
i feel for your situation and i am deeply for the harm he caused you, but this is a very nice written poem. to be honest the repition of the same syllables create a nice tone for such a tragic poem. NICE WORK OVERALL.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The consistent ryhme seems to lock the writer to the situation. It finally looks as though they are going to break away at listed, also a reasonable time to expect it would stop in reality. It's a tragic twist when it turns into another rhyme and so it continues. If only people didn't have to go through this experience.