! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..... Hello …..Hello....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ... Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..... Hello …..Hello....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...

Rating: 4.9


HELLO …..HELLO....

frog is away from falling bridge
lest it may suffer creases of fall
as it jumps over the fall by mirth
cry of falling rebounds the frog

we laugh loud by our own dwarf shadows
lest shadow may enroll us in livid grime
light still burns shadow even in eclipse
semblance swaddles across dwarfism

grace eclectic rumbles by grimace
as thought elastic ambles in green
ocean stoops over blue being deep
frog still resounds grin beneath green

tear saddles faster by sorrow
night breaths deep in apprehension
beauty of love entices upon blue
I or you call me always hello, hello.....! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessy Kemp 21 November 2008

Absolutely stunning, I felt all the emotion, lovely poem.

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 20 November 2008

Another great poem about a frog. Thanks for the comment on my frog poem.

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Ramin Chaman 19 November 2008

If you wish the beloved not to loosen her pact keep hold of one end of the thread so that she may do the same

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Barbara Vanier 19 November 2008

oh my goodness... this is wonderful. You have brought a tear to my eye. I can see the frog there by the bridge and your shadows. The words draw me in and I am living in another time and place. I am living and watching the frog. Blue can also turn to red then sorrowed no longer. Wonderfully written.

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Original Unknown Girl 19 November 2008

Many interesting images in this on Dr Kar and the final line gives it the true human touch. HG: -) xx

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Rabi Anata 06 July 2009

I especially love the use of colors in the poem. Very beautiful, start to finish.: } 10! !

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Marieta Maglas 01 July 2009

I like this tear of green sadness, so subtly visible in the ocean of blue life.wonderful poem...10+++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

A beautiful poem with beautiful imagery. Amazing 10+

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Catrina Heart 11 February 2009

A very nice poem written in excellence...with a simple title though have a very deep mening and context...crafted with zeal...10+++

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Alison Cassidy 22 November 2008

Your frog entrances, your use of color hypnotizes, your love of language is par excellence. Yes, indeed. Your poetry fascinates. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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