Help Me! (Song) Comments

Great poem. i really can relate to it because i have been in around the same situation. if you ever need someone im here though.

when we feel lonely we just have to look at the sun or the rainbow.... then such broken feelings will be gathered.... sweet poem/song! ! !

Hey I love this poem! Keep it up though for a song don't it need more to it?

You have an easy way, a natural flow when it comes to releasing your emotions. Very nice. You keep your dedicated deliberate practice of writing and being involved with music and help will come! You'll be your own saviour. I run, exercycle, and hike in the park every day to maintain balance. The more sensitive you are, and you are, the more you need to move your bod. Smile at everyone and take in the healing smiles that are returned to you. Carol

waaaaaaaaaaw what a good lyrics for a song...waaaaaaaaaaaw...keep writing girl!

It sounds, like an outry of a loner, such i can much relate to, goo write, though a song doesn't it need a chorus at least, or some type of stanza to represent verse? Good Write, Please comment my poems if you will please thanks! !

Dear Author, Good Art Work Thanks For Sharing, Praise the lord Merry `X`Mas and New year Wishes.