Her Beauty Poem by Glen Kappy

Her Beauty

Rating: 5.0


Her beauty
like the model castle—
its unstained wood inside.

Friday, December 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 07 January 2020

Short and succinct. Nice modern haiku. Liked the unstained grains over there 10/10

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Glen Kappy 07 January 2020

thank for reading and commenting on this, kesav. i rediscovered this piece recently, liked it and posted it, but i confess i don't remember the woman who prompted it nor what i intended with the simile. -glen

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Denis Mair 27 December 2019

This conveys the appeal of a woman who is regal but doews not show off her charms. // Unstained wood can be beautiful. For a paean to the beauty of wood grain, I invite you to read my poem MAN CUT IN WOOD on PoemHunter.// I saw wood grain displayed beautifully in the Kurama Shinto Shrine, which has an altar made from varieties of wood fitted together. There is no sacred image behind the altar, just panels of wood.

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Glen Kappy 27 December 2019

hey, denis! thank you for reading this and commenting. though not an expert in woods, i've admired the grains and colors of woods. i'll check your poem out. -glen

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Glen Kappy

Glen Kappy

New York, NY USA
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