Lizelah Thaugally


Her Cardboard Lover - Poem by Lizelah Thaugally

Life had now set her on a path
As fresh and green
As lime groves in summer.
She looked on at the edge
Of the precipice and held to her bosom
all that was now hers..............................


Comments about Her Cardboard Lover by Lizelah Thaugally

  • (6/15/2009 5:47:00 AM)


    Every word is jam-packed with meaning. It has a wonderfully light and vibrant tone. Just exactly what I needed to read today. You are a fabulous wordsmith. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

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  • (4/25/2008 5:57:00 AM)


    Wonderful exposition of lost dreams and growing up. Loved it.
    Fx
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  • (4/21/2008 5:27:00 AM)


    I absolutely love this. The imagery is superb, your analogy is spot on. It resonates. Bravo! HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • (4/12/2008 5:41:00 PM)


    Interesting poem quite vivid and dark thanks Nik (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 27, 2008


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