Brian Hinckley

Rookie (07-30-81 / Buffalo, New York)

Her Face - Poem by Brian Hinckley

Her face
shining in the dead of night.
Her soul
shining to keep the light.

She brings me back
from the edge I walk.
She brings me back
with a simple talk.

Her eyes
shining across the miles.
Her heart
shining through all the trials.

She brings me back
to a place I need.
She brings me back
where I don't bleed.

Does she know
what she's done?
Does she care
that I feel?
Can she know
that the light has won?


Comments about Her Face by Brian Hinckley

  • (5/15/2007 8:49:00 PM)

    amazing, i am speechless (Report)Reply

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  • (5/6/2007 3:02:00 PM)

    Wow, you just amaze me
    You capture every single moment, every glimpse of the eye, everything
    It's just great
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  • (4/25/2007 10:43:00 PM)

    Great write Brian. I liked the ending where you say that it was her inner and outer beauty that captured you and brought you to her presence (where you don't bleed) . Top marks!
    -Michael
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 19, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 16, 2011


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