Her Last Breath Poem by Kevin Patrick

Her Last Breath

Rating: 5.0


Her last breath...
Was not foreclosed
By a heavy toll
Of ages design
Or collateral costs
of ravenous time
It was not spent
Within a circle of family
Nourishing love
As they applauded
Her reaching
Life's finishing line


No...


it was stollen
Without warrent
In a remorseless
Storm of bullets
Harvested by rage
And Hates undying pride
It was spent
Scared and alone
In a makeshift
Combat zone
Between produce
And aisles 5


She didn't have
The privlige
Of playing with
Grand children
Or giving her love
A last kiss
After sixty years
Of wedded bliss
She was denied
Writing her last page
And journey towards
lands of light




Eighty six years
Surviving wars
And family plots
Climbing defeats
And reaching peaks
of basking triumphs
Nearly a century
Wiped out
In seconds
Through the barrel
Of a gun
And adolescent hate


Her last breath...
Was taken
By a child's hand
And her countries mark

Tuesday, May 31, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: racism,murder
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 31 May 2022

Kevin, this is one of your very best! An indictment against immoral racism and senseless murder. Top marks!

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Written with such depth and feeling......Top score dear Kevin

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Powerful and poignant! This is what is happening today! Never know when bullets will pierce. A life full of fear and horror!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 June 2022

Excellent poem Kevin Have you read my poem 'Mr. Cruz Tell Me'? Please I would love yr opinion

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So timely and beautifully crafted and presented.

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A powerful and poignant depiction of racism and murder. The images are so heartrending that make you cry.

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