Her Special 'Treats' Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Her Special 'Treats'

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and Her special treats being warm
could be considered a lusious tropical
island of wait.
from the back, one eye below the moon.
drawn in between every mans, wanting.
out the window grows a palm tree who's
top seems to be in the clouds, though barely.
though from the valley of sweetly, each and every
dropp of sweat laying heavy thus,
one dripp at a time seems damply, coalescing.
and growing warmer as the sun, because it does.
things becoming as they should, head held up high.
and the wind carries off the smell, from each side.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dakotas Angel 08 January 2010

i like that it really made me think, i like the detail its the kind you can add on to but not let it change, nice work :)

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James McLain

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